The Crawl Space by Arthur Mills. Book cover: glowing wooden chest, skeleton, three old keys, and red eyes in the dark.

The Crawl Space Features 24 Choices and 11 Alternate Endings

Bullying is receiving much attention in the media, but it never had the repercussions that middle school bullies Bruce, Mark, and Charles will face. Trapped in a haunted school as their punishment, these bullies find their fates in the hands of their readers in Arthur Mills’ teen/young adult interactive novel The Crawl Space.

Bruce, Mark, and Charles have long been the school bullies, tormenting younger and weaker kids. But they go too far the day they try to make their fellow student, Johnny, enter the dreaded crawl space under the school cafeteria's stage. Everyone knows the crawl space is haunted by a boy who entered it and never returned, and Johnny is terrified. But fortunately, the school principal catches the boys before it's too late. As punishment, she offers them the choice of notes to their parents or spending the weekend cleaning out the crawl space. More scared of their parents than the rumor of a ghost, they choose the latter.

Once they are alone in the school, the boys discover that not only is the crawl space haunted, but so is the rest of the school. When the ghost gives the boys a riddle to solve, they must make many difficult choices to ensure their survival. However, the reader gets to make these choices, ranging from which hallway to go down to which key to open a mysterious chest. Whether the boys survive their punishment is as much the reader's responsibility as it is that of the boys themselves.

Cafeteria scene: kids crowd around a boy being bullied, a drink spilled on the floor. The Crawl Space.

Trapped in the Haunted School—Their Fate is in Your Hands

When the principal punishes three middle school boys for bullying a fellow student, they find themselves trapped in the haunted school over the weekend. What happens next is up to the reader in the teen/young adult interactive novel, The Crawl Space.

Mr. Tripper, the school janitor, stands holding a wet mop, keys on his belt. The Crawl Space.

Why did I Write The Crawl Space?

I wrote The Crawl Space because, as a kid, I hated when adults made decisions for me. I turned to books for escape, only to realize that authors were just as controlling, forcing readers to follow a single path with no say in the story. Now that I’m an author, I’ve made a promise to give readers control. In The Crawl Space, you’ll make up to twenty-four choices leading to eleven different endings. With over eighty-five illustrations bringing every supernatural, terrifying, and bizarre moment to life, the fate of the main characters—and whether they survive their weekend in a haunted middle school—is entirely in your hands.

Bruce, Mark, and Charles fight off a massive coiled black snake with bared fangs. The Crawl Space.

What are the Professionals Saying?

Destined to please adults and kids alike, The Crawl Space is a hit among all generations. Tyler R. Tichelaar, the author of the award-winning Narrow Lives, states, "The Crawl Space is as much fun as the Choose Your Own Adventure books from when I was a kid. Beyond being a great adventure story, The Crawl Space teaches readers lessons about bullying and friendship and the difficult choices we all have to make in life."

"The End" graphic: bone letters wrapped by a green snake, with a skeleton resting on top. From The Crawl Space.

See the Story Unfold Through 85 Professional Illustrations

In The Crawl Space, the illustrator brings key moments, clues, and choices to life, challenging readers to look deeper. The illustrations aren’t just there to support the text, they encourage analysis, reveal hidden details, and draw readers further into the experience. Each image holds a piece of the puzzle, making the reader an active part of the story.

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Key Figures & The Crawl Space

Bruce, Mark, and Charles find their individual characteristics to be a double-edged sword as they navigate the mysterious crawl space and the haunted school. While their unique traits sometimes prove beneficial, they can also lead them into unforeseen danger. Ultimately, it falls upon the reader to act as the ultimate arbiter of their destiny, holding the power to determine whether they emerge victorious from the nightmarish corridors of the haunted school or succumb to their ominous fate.

Bruce, a long-haired blond boy in a red plaid shirt and jeans, stands with hand on chin. The Crawl Space.
Mark, a blond boy in a blue shirt and green sneakers, sits cross-legged. The Crawl Space.
Charles, a blond boy in a yellow shirt and jeans, stands with arms crossed. The Crawl Space.
Skeleton hung by the neck from a beam, standing beside a dresser with two books. The Crawl Space.
Bruce, Mark, and Charles kneel around a wooden chest in a dim crawl space. The Crawl Space.

Bruce

Bruce is confident, assertive, and has a sense of humor. He plays a leadership role in the group, balancing rationality and courage when facing challenges. He's a vocal and assertive figure who can easily capture the attention of his peers.

Mark

Mark is an observant and curious individual, yet very timid. Mark exhibits a degree of innocence and naivety but has a strong bond with his friends. Mark's character is characterized by his compassion, loyalty, and innocence.

Charles

Charles is the smartest of the bullies. He's a problem-solver and analytical thinker. Charles frequently employs sarcasm and humor as a defense mechanism, especially when confronted with fear or uncertainty.

Mr. Bones

Mr. Bones embodies fear, mystery, and consequences. He serves as a catalyst for character development and contributes to the story's suspenseful and supernatural atmosphere.​​

The Crawl Space

The crawl space is a symbol that represents fear, transformation, adventure, redemption, and the unseen aspects of the characters' lives. It serves as a central element that drives the plot, challenges the characters, and ultimately leads to their personal growth and the resolution of the story's central conflicts.

Understanding Bullying Through Choice and Consequence

Placing oneself in the shoes of bullies in an interactive story allows children and young adults to experience the consequences of negative actions firsthand. By navigating the repercussions and emotions tied to bullying behavior, readers gain empathy and insight into the pain caused. This experiential learning, coupled with witnessing the outcomes of their choices, can deter them from engaging in bullying. They internalize the moral lessons and recognize the importance of kindness and understanding in real-world interactions.

Branching plot choice page: Mark looks worried between Charles and Bruce, with two path options. The Crawl Space.
End-of-scene illustration: "The End" in bone letters above a half-skull face rising from water. The Crawl Space.
Bruce, Mark, and Charles fight off a massive coiled black snake with bared fangs. The Crawl Space.
"The End" graphic: bone letters wrapped by a green snake, with a skeleton resting on top. From The Crawl Space.
Cafeteria scene: kids crowd around a boy being bullied, a drink spilled on the floor. The Crawl Space.
Illustration of a frightened girl pressing her hands to a glass door as flames rage behind her. The Crawl Space.

Encourages Multiple Readings

Given the multiple endings and pathways, readers are incentivized to explore all the story's possibilities, honing their analytical and observational skills in the process.

Understanding Storyline Structures

Interactive novels like The Crawl Space allow readers to see how different choices can lead to different story arcs, deepening their understanding of storytelling mechanics.

Empowerment Through Autonomy

I wrote The Crawl Space to give readers the control I once longed for. The ability to shape a story is powerful, and my hope is that it encourages readers to take ownership of their own lives and choices.

Decision-Making Skills

The interactive nature of The Crawl Space, with its 24 choices and 11 alternate endings, challenges readers to make decisions that will determine the outcome of the story. This exercises the ability to think critically and evaluate the consequences of one's actions.

Empathy Development

By placing the reader in the shoes of the bullies trapped in a haunted school, they can experience the fears and vulnerabilities of the antagonists. This can help cultivate empathy towards even those who might not seem deserving.

Moral Reflection

The Crawl Space provides opportunities for readers to reflect on the ethics of revenge, punishment, and justice, sparking valuable internal dialogues.

The Crawl Space Book Trailer

Also Available on Amazon

You can purchase The Crawl Space directly from my website or from Amazon. Each option has its advantages. Buying here means you'll receive a personally signed copy and directly support me as an indie author, since Amazon takes a significant percentage of sales and doesn't offer signed copies. However, Amazon provides faster and sometimes free shipping, plus easy returns, whereas signed copies from my website are non-returnable. The choice is yours, and I appreciate your support either way!

Selected Reviews

"I started reading this book before what I really knew what it was about – or what it was. When I came to the first choice, I started laughing – my mind flying back 20 years to when I Chose my Own Adventures. Arthur M. Mills Jr. has created the new generation of this kind of insightful, exciting and interactive novel with 'The Crawl Space.'"

Amazon Reviewer

"We've been purchasing a couple of bullying books for my son because he has experienced some of this at school and we wanted him to understand that he is not alone. I had no idea that this was an interactive book and this is such a great thing for the kids to be able to participate in the story."

Amazon Reviewer

"I am eight and I thought this book was SUPER exciting also interesting and it got very scary when it got nearer to the end. I really liked the parts when we could choose which places to go to, and I think the three characters (Bruce, Charles and Mark) were creatively made."

Amazon Reviewer

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